Component 02 Question 2: language and structure in a short section

Component 02 Question 2 (6 marks, AO2) on a short section of Text 1: how the writer uses language and structure to show something the question names, with relevant subject terminology.
Saying a lot in a short answer: a few precise points that cover both language and structure, each with a quotation and its effect, keeping to the named lines.
The worked example uses two linked stories of fear in a dark house at night, both printed in the lesson: Text 1, the ending of W. W. Jacobs's story 'The Monkey's Paw' (1902), and Text 2, from Algernon Blackwood's story 'The Empty House' (1906).
What separates the levels, in our own words, and a model answer with the level and mark an examiner would give, and why.
A weaker and a stronger answer to the same task side by side, with what lifts the weaker one to the next level.
Sentence starters for the question and a short checklist of the steps, for students aiming at Grade 4 and above.

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