AQA GCSE English Language · 8700
Paper 1, Paper 2
Revise: Sentence demarcation‘Maya packed her bag and she checked the timetable and she hurried downstairs’ has conjunctions connecting its clauses. It may sound repetitive, but it is not faulty merely because it is long. You could make it more fluent: ‘Maya packed her bag, checked the timetable and hurried downstairs.’